Revision

   After we viewed our third quarter submission in class we received several compliments and critiques. A couple peers agreed that this movie is a lot better and the plot is well-developed compared to our last movie. They also agreed that the sound was a lot better however, we realized that when we edited we turned the audio gain down too much. There were a couple technical errors with the sound and we realized that it was because the microphone was too close to the actors during filming. There is a part in the movie where Rachel screams and it is very loud in the movie because the microphone was very close to her. Before we submit our movie we are going to fix the audio levels by turning the audio gain up and cutting the part out where she screams loudly into the microphone. We also received several compliments about our film, camera shots, and acting. A peer also told us that our plot is very interesting and relative as it takes place on Siesta Key. We also were told that our camera shots were very steady and contribute to the atmosphere that the audience is supposed to feel in a horror film. Another peer said that the acting was a lot better and is a lot more natural and less awkward than our last movie. Overall we received a lot of compliments from the class and also helpful comments for revisions for the final film.